Improving comments

Talofa lava bloggers! Tipiloma here today I will be talking about improving my comments when I comment on  another person's blog. We had to go on a site which is called improving comments and it was made on a goggle drawing and there were information to what we had to do. We had to take a screenshot of our comment and then put it on the goggle drawing. Here is my goggle drawing.

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