We are working on using descriptive language by sharing our writing straight onto our blog.  The challenge we have is to describe a place using only six sentences. After reading the description you need to guess the place that has been described. It would really help if you say what clues helped you come to this conclusion.
1.The sun shines at me when ever I move.
2.when I stay in the sun I can get tan.
3.I am surround by the big and tall trees.
4.As I swim I see lots of people swimming too.
5.As I come out of the sea water comes up to my feet.
6.When I leave I can see the beautiful sundown.